Passage 072 · 1856
"Crossing Brooklyn Ferry"
Main effectThrough vocatives to nature, exclamatory syntax, and parallel "face to face" encounters, Whitman creates democratic mysticism. Form IS the vision—syntax that addresses tide and clouds as equals, grammar that refuses hierarchy between human and natural world.
Device index
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Tropes
Direct address to non-human entity.
No words highlightedEmphatic outcry.
Schemes
Repetition at beginning of clauses.
Syntax
"Flood-tide below me!"—hyphenated compound noun in vocative case (direct address), followed by prepositional phrase "below me" specifying spatial relationship.
The exclamation point makes this performative utterance, not mere description. Syntax creates spoken enthusiasm.
No words highlighted"I see you face to face!"—subject-verb-object-adverbial phrase. The idiom "face to face" suggests equal, intimate encounter.
"Clouds of the west—sun there half an hour high—"—em-dashes create parenthetical aside within vocative. Syntax interrupts itself to add descriptive detail before continuing address.
The second sentence mirrors first syntactically, creating parallel structure: - [Vocative], I see you face to face - [Vocative]—[description]—I see you also face to face The addition of "also" shows Whitman's democratic vision extending equally to all natural phenomena.
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Compound Noun Vocative
"Flood-tide below me!"—hyphenated compound noun in vocative case (direct address), followed by prepositional phrase "below me" specifying spatial relationship.
Exclamatory Sentence
The exclamation point makes this performative utterance, not mere description. Syntax creates spoken enthusiasm.
Parallel Structure
"I see you face to face!"—subject-verb-object-adverbial phrase. The idiom "face to face" suggests equal, intimate encounter.
Dash as Syntax
"Clouds of the west—sun there half an hour high—"—em-dashes create parenthetical aside within vocative. Syntax interrupts itself to add descriptive detail before continuing address.
Repeated Pattern
The second sentence mirrors first syntactically, creating parallel structure:
- [Vocative], I see you face to face
- [Vocative]—[description]—I see you also face to face
The addition of "also" shows Whitman's democratic vision extending equally to all natural phenomena.
Stylistic Effect
Through vocatives to nature, exclamatory syntax, and parallel "face to face" encounters, Whitman creates democratic mysticism. Form IS the vision—syntax that addresses tide and clouds as equals, grammar that refuses hierarchy between human and natural world.