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Syntax & Word Order

Enumeration / Accumulatio

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Piling up details, examples, or charges into a deliberate list. By the tenth item the reader stops weighing and starts accepting: the size of the pile becomes the argument.

Whitman's catalogues of trades and bodies in "Song of Myself"

Don't confuse it with. Simple listing is neutral; enumeratio is a list with rhetorical intent — the pile *is* the point. Congeries is the near-synonym.

Drill this device — 15 excerpts

In the Reader — 15 excerpts

Hath not a Jew eyes? Hath not a Jew hands, organs, dimensions, senses, affections, passions? If you prick us, do we not bleed? If you tickle us, do we not laugh? If you poison us, do we not die?
— William Shakespeare, The Merchant of Venice · open the passage →
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
— William Shakespeare, Hamlet · open the passage →
…of which I have no desire to call to mind, there lived not long since one of those gentlemen that keep a lance in the lance-rack, an old buckler, a lean hack, and a greyhound for coursing.
— Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote (translated by Edith Grossman) · open the passage →
In a village of La Mancha, the name of which I have no desire to call to mind, there lived not long since one of those gentlemen that keep a lance in the lance-rack, an old buckler, a lean hack, and a greyhound for coursing.
— Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote (translated by Edith Grossman) · open the passage →
I have, alas, studied philosophy, jurisprudence and medicine, too, and, worst of all, theology
— Johann Wolfgang von Goethe, Faust (translated by Walter Kaufmann) · open the passage →
Half sunk a shattered visage lies
— Percy Bysshe Shelley, The Examiner · open the passage →
The voice of the sea is seductive; never ceasing, whispering, clamoring, murmuring, inviting the soul to wander for a spell in abysses of solitude; to lose itself in mazes of inward contemplation.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening · open the passage →
nor am I one of your Hollywood-movie ectoplasms. I am a man of substance, of flesh and bone, fiber and liquids—and I might even be said to possess a mind.
— Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man · open the passage →
nor am I one of your Hollywood-movie ectoplasms. I am a man of substance, of flesh and bone, fiber and liquids—and I might even be said to possess a mind.
— Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man · open the passage →
He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish.
— Ernest Hemingway, The Old Man and the Sea · open the passage →
I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked,
— Allen Ginsberg, Howl and Other Poems · open the passage →
The only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones who never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn like fabulous yellow roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars.
— Jack Kerouac, On the Road · open the passage →
Okonkwo was well known throughout the nine villages and even beyond. His fame rested on solid personal achievements. As a young man of eighteen he had brought honor to his village by throwing Amalinze the Cat. Amalinze was the great wrestler who for seven years was unbeaten, from Umuofia to Mbaino.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart · open the passage →
The Orient was almost a European invention, and had been since antiquity a place of romance, exotic beings, haunting memories and landscapes, remarkable experiences.
— Edward Said, Orientalism · open the passage →
This is a cold room in University Administration, wood-walled, Remington-hung, double-windowed against the November heat.
— David Foster Wallace, Infinite Jest · open the passage →

Travels with

Devices that share a passage with enumeration / accumulatio most often — company reveals character.

Asyndeton 9 Litotes 7 Anaphora 7 Hyperbole 6 Polysyndeton 4 Isocolon 4 Parataxis 3 Antithesis 3

The rest of the family

Hyperbaton Anastrophe Periodic Sentence Cumulative (Loose) Sentence Parataxis Parenthesis Apposition / Appositive Zeugma Hendiadys Pleonasm Passive Voice Cleft Sentence