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Metaphor & Figuration

Personification

per-sah-nih-fih-KAY-shun / pərˌsɒnɪfɪˈkeɪʃən

Giving human qualities, actions, or feelings to something non-human: nations conceive, winds sigh. The description lets the reader imagine it acting or feeling like a person.

"Because I could not stop for Death – / He kindly stopped for me –" — Dickinson

Don't confuse it with Prosopopoeia, Pathetic Fallacy. Prosopopoeia goes further and gives the thing a speaking voice. Pathetic fallacy is personification of nature specifically, colored by the observer's emotion.

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A similar example that does not qualify

The wind blew through the window.

Blowing is an ordinary action of wind. An active verb alone does not personify it.

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Examples

The empty house waited patiently for its owners.
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The house is given the human capacity to wait with patience.

Because I could not stop for Death – He kindly stopped for me –
— Emily Dickinson, Poem · Lines 1–2 · read the source →

Death receives a personal pronoun and acts like a courteous caller who stops for someone.

A possible effect: The courteous action makes the encounter with death disconcertingly social and calm.

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Blow, winds, and crack your cheeks! Rage! Blow!
— William Shakespeare, King Lear · Act 3, scene 2 · read the source →

The winds are given cheeks and commanded to rage; they are also directly addressed.

A possible effect: Giving the storm a face and temper lets Lear speak to it as an opponent or companion in anger.

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The wind begged to be let in.
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A human request is attributed to the wind.

A possible effect: “Begged” lets the noise sound like a needy visitor seeking entry.

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The old house sulked behind its shuttered windows.
Practice example · written for this exercise

A house is assigned the human mood and behavior of sulking.

A possible effect: The closed windows can seem like a refusal to engage with the outside world.

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Often used alongside this device

Explore devices that often appear in the same passages as personification.

Metaphor 22 Anaphora 17 Antithesis 11 Parallelism 11 Passive Voice 10 Apposition / Appositive 10 Irony 8 Litotes 8

The rest of the family

Metaphor Simile Catachresis Metonymy Synecdoche Prosopopoeia Pathetic Fallacy Transferred Epithet / Hypallage Metalepsis Symbol Allusion Mythopoesis